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Thunder and Orange Crush

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Maya's thumbs moved across her iPhone screen like they were training for the Olympics, but no amount of refreshing could make Jake's text appear faster. The three dots had been bouncing for four minutes now. Four.

She was sitting on the bleachers near the padel courts, where her older brother Leo was absolutely destroying some poor guy in what looked like the most intense game of tennis-golf she'd ever witnessed. The thwack of the ball against the glass walls was actually satisfying, in a rhythmic kind of way. Almost meditative. If you ignored the part where her stomach was doing full gymnastics routines.

"You're doing that thing again," Leo called from the court, sweat dripping down his face. "The face. The one that says you're overthinking everything."

Maya rolled her eyes so hard she temporarily saw the back of her skull. "I am not overthinking. I am simply... awaiting correspondence with appropriate emotional pacing."

"You're waiting for Baseball Boy to text you back." Leo grinned, dodging a ball that would've taken his head off. "Just shoot your shot, Maya. What's the worst that happens?"

The worst that happens was Maya's entire brain short-circuiting, but she didn't say that.

Instead she watched the sky turn this insane orange color, like someone had spilled a soda all over the clouds. Sunset was hitting that golden hour where everything looks cinematic and fake, even the cracked pavement and the overflowing garbage cans. Jake played baseball, obviously. That's how she'd noticed him in the first place—watching from these exact bleachers back in September when he'd made this incredible catch in right field that had half the school talking.

Her phone buzzed.

Maya nearly dropped it.

*hey u still at the courts?*

*yeah why*

*omw. bringing snacks. also something 2 tell u*

Something to tell her. What did that mean? Something good? Something bad? Something neutral but with dramatic implications? Her heart was beating so fast she wondered if this was what cardiac arrest felt like.

Then came the first crack of thunder, and the sky opened up like a broken faucet.

Lightning split the sky in half—this jagged, electric-purple line that looked terrifying and beautiful all at once. Leo cursed and grabbed his gear. Everyone was scattering toward the covered area by the courts, phones and equipment clutched against chests like precious artifacts.

And through the rain curtain, she saw him.

Jake was running toward her, clutching a plastic bag and looking like he'd just sprinted through a monsoon. His hair was plastered to his forehead and his shirt was soaked through and he was laughing, actually laughing, as he ducked under the awning.

"I got you Fritos," he said, breathless. "And also I was going to say that I've been wanting to ask you to homecoming for like three weeks but I kept chickening out."

The rain was coming down in sheets. Lightning flashed again, closer this time. And Maya was pretty sure nothing had ever been more perfect than this completely drenched, slightly terrified moment.

"Well," she said, trying to sound casual while her pulse did cartwheels. "You asked now."

"So... is that a yes?"

"That's absolutely a yes."

Somewhere behind them, Leo was wolf-whistling. Maya's phone buzzed again with a text from her mom asking where she was. And Jake's smile was the kind of bright that would've been visible even without all the lightning.

Sometimes the best moments weren't the ones you planned. They were the ones that found you soaking wet and holding Fritos on a Tuesday night, everything illuminated and electric and impossible to predict.