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The Riddle at Miller's Pond

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The humidity in Maya's backyard was thick enough to chew. Her quinceañera was in full swing, tías drinking Coronas, primos blasting bad reggaeton, and somewhere a **dog** barking at nothing. I wiped my sweating **palm** on my jeans for the third time. Just ask her, I told myself. It's not like it's rocket science.

But standing there with Mateo's plastic cup of punch in hand, watching Lina laugh with her friends by the patio—yeah, it was exactly rocket science. My brain was doing that thing where it replayed every conversation we'd ever had, looking for signs.

"You look like you're about to throw up," Mateo said, materializing beside me. "Just do it already."

"You're one to talk. When are you gonna tell Sofia you like her?"

He choked on his punch. "That's—different. Anyway, stop changing the subject. Go over there."

But then Lina spotted me and waved me over. My stomach did something concerning. I followed Mateo toward the patio where the girls were crowded around something on the glass table.

"It's so sad," Lina said, looking up at me with those eyes that made my whole nervous system short-circuit. "My brother won it at the carnival and now it's just... dying."

I leaned in. A tiny **goldfish** swam in circles in a bowl barely bigger than my face. The water was cloudy.

"That's not even a gallon," I heard myself say. "He needs at least five times that space. And a filter. And—" I stopped. Nerd mode activated. Great first impression, really crushing it.

But Lina was smiling. "You know about fish?"

"My sister's obsessed. We have, like, three tanks."

For the next twenty minutes, we talked about nothing and everything. The humidity didn't matter anymore. Neither did the tías staring or the music or anything except the way she tucked her hair behind her ear when she was thinking.

Then her cousin Carlos showed up, swaggering like he owned the place. "Yo, check this," he said, pulling out his phone. "Just won two hundred bucks on that scratch-off." He held up the ticket like it was the Holy Grail.

"**Bull**," Mateo said immediately.

"For real, bro!"

They bickered good-naturedly. Lina rolled her eyes, but she was smiling. I caught her looking at me, and something clicked.

Later, as the sun started going down, we found ourselves sitting on the edge of the empty pool in the backyard. My phone buzzed—my mom wondering where I was—but I ignored it.

"You're weird," she said quietly.

"Thanks?"

"No, like... in a good way. You're not like all these other guys." She gestured toward Carlos, who was now challenging someone to arm wrestling. "You notice things."

I swallowed. "What kind of things?"

She turned toward me, and there was this moment, this perfect crystalline moment where the air between us felt charged with possibility. Like the whole universe was holding its breath.

"Things that matter," she said.

I'd like to tell you I kissed her right there, that it was some movie-perfect moment. But real life isn't like that. What happened was smaller but bigger: we sat there while the party wound down around us, talking about everything and nothing, and I realized that the riddle I'd been trying to solve—the **sphinx** in my head that kept demanding the perfect answer, the perfect move, the perfect line—had never been a riddle at all.

She just wanted someone to notice.

I walked home with my heart doing something weird in my chest, palm still sweating but for a completely different reason now. Somewhere that dog was still barking, the night was thick with heat and possibility, and I hadn't even asked for her number yet.

But I would. Tomorrow. Definitely tomorrow.