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The Lightning in His Veins

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Marcus stood in the doorway of his apartment, watching Elena pack. The cardboard boxes had multiplied like invasive species overnight. Three years together, reduced to tape and cardboard in forty-eight hours.

"You're being a bull about this," she said, not looking up from folding her sweaters. "Just charging forward, head down, refusing to see what's actually happening."

The word hit him like it always did—a strange shorthand between them for his stubbornness, his unwillingness to bend. But this time, she wasn't smiling when she said it.

"I asked you to come to therapy with me," he said quietly. "That's not being a bull. That's trying to fix something that's breaking."

She straightened, pressing her palms against her lower back. "You wanted to fix me. There's a difference. You and your goddamn vitamins—you think everything can be solved with the right supplement, the right protocol, the right solution. Some things aren't deficient, Marcus. Some things are just... finished."

Outside, the sky had turned that peculiar shade of green that precedes violence. Thunder rolled, distant but approaching.

She'd started leaving her vitamin bottles on the counter after he'd bought her that expensive set—iron, magnesium, D3, a rainbow of promises in gelatin capsules. She'd taken them religiously for two weeks, then stopped. The bottles remained as artifacts, silent witnesses to his attempt to solve her melancholy with chemistry.

"So that's it?" he asked. "We're just... finished?"

"We were friends first," she said, her voice cracking. "Maybe we should have stayed that way."

The first flash of lightning illuminated her face—tears tracking through mascara, the familiar lines of exhaustion he'd memorized over three years. In that stark white light, he saw her clearly: not something to be fixed, not a puzzle to solve. Just a person who had reached her limit.

She zipped the last duffel bag. The sound was like a period at the end of a sentence.

"I'll send for the rest," she said.

When the door clicked shut behind her, Marcus didn't follow. He stood in the green-tinged dark as the storm finally broke, rain hammering against windows like applause for a performance he hadn't realized was ending. On the counter, the vitamin bottles caught each flash of lightning, casting long shadows across his empty kitchen. He'd wanted to be the person who healed her. Instead, he'd just been another person who couldn't.

Sometimes lightning doesn't strike so much as it simply reveals what was already burning.