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Lightning in the Deep End

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The pool deck felt like a social minefield, each lounge chair occupied by someone who'd definitely评判 my tragic attempt at a back float earlier. My friend Kai shot me a sympathetic 'you'll get there' look from the diving board while casually executing a perfect flip, because of course he was good at everything.

"Your form's getting better," he called out, dripping pool water as he sauntered over.

"Dude, I've been pretending to prune for twenty minutes," I muttered, checking my iPhone under my towel. Naturally, no notifications. Because apparently the entire group chat had ghosted me.

Outside, the sky purpled into something ominous. Thunder rumbled like a bass drop at a party that was about to get lit for all the wrong reasons.

"Swimming during a thunderstorm? Bold choice," said Maya, sliding her sunglasses up her forehead. She was that girl - the one who'd had a glow-up since freshman year and now radiated main character energy.

Before Kai could respond with something smooth, actual lightning shattered the sky. Not the distant flash variety, but full-on, purple-white veins spider-webbing across the horizon. The pool lights flickered. Someone's iPhone skittered across the wet deck and plopped into the water.

"My phone!" Maya screamed, but nobody moved because we were all frozen by the second lightning strike - closer this time.

"Everyone out NOW!" the lifeguard's whistle cut through the sudden chaos.

We scrambled toward the locker room, but Kai grabbed my arm. "Wait, someone grab that phone!"

"Are you insane?" I yelled over the thunder.

"It's not hers!" Kai shouted back. "It's your brother's! He left it when he went to get snacks!"

The rain started hammering down as I fished for the glowing iPhone in the chlorinated water. Lightning kept flashing, illuminating everything in strobe-light freezes - Kai's concerned expression, Maya's shocked face, my own terrified reflection in the pool surface.

My brother's phone had a new notification. From the group chat. They were planning my surprise birthday party.

Kai saw it too. "So that's why everyone's been acting sus."

"You knew?" I demanded, suddenly not caring about the rain or the lightning or the fact that we were standing in a thunderstorm.

"Organized the whole thing," he admitted, looking embarrassed. "Been trying to get you actually swimming for months because you wanted to learn."

The next lightning strike hit the pool's transformer. Darkness swallowed everything.

"Happy birthday," Kai said in the dark. "And yeah, your form's terrible."