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Electric Waters

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Maya's mom left the vitamin bottle on the kitchen counter again, the orange plastic glaring at her like a judgment. "You're not eating enough vegetables," she'd said that morning, doing that thing where she pretended to be casual about Maya's health but was definitely spiraling about the swim meet next weekend.

The vitamin C tablets rolled around in Maya's backpack all day, knocking against her phone and the empty water bottle she kept forgetting to refill. By seventh period, she was dehydrated and her crush, Jamal, had finally noticed her—but only because she'd nearly fainted during PE while attempting to show off her diving skills. The entire pool deck had witnessed her graceful collapse into a deck chair.

"You good?" Jamal had asked, genuine concern in his eyes that was almost worse than if he'd laughed.

"Just low on... electrolytes," she'd mumbled, wanting to dissolve into the chlorine-scented air.

Now it was Friday, and the community pool was packed. Summer storm warnings flashed on everyone's phones—thunderstorms rolling in from the west—but nobody wanted to leave. The air was thick, that heavy ozone smell that made your skin prickle. Maya sat on the edge of the diving board, legs dangling in the cool water, pretending she wasn't analyzing every laugh and conversation from the popular kids clustered near the snack bar.

Then the sky tore open.

Lightning struck somewhere close—too close. The entire pool area lit up blue-white, and the thunder that followed shook the ground beneath Maya's feet. Everyone screamed. People scrambled for towels and bags, but Maya just sat there, frozen, watching the rain begin to hammer down in wild sheets.

"Yo, you gotta get down from there!" It was Jamal, shouting over the thunder, waving at her from the pool deck. He wasn't running away—he was coming toward her. "Now!"

She scrambled down, slipping on the wet board, and he caught her arm. They ran together through the downpour to the covered picnic area, both of them soaked and breathless and laughing like idiots.

"You're crazy," he said, grinning, hair plastered to his forehead. "Who sits on a diving board during a lightning storm?"

"Just waiting for someone to rescue me," she heard herself say, and immediately wanted to die.

But Jamal just laughed again, and suddenly the storm didn't seem so scary. The vitamin pills were still rattling in her bag, her mom would still worry about her nutrition, and Monday at school would still be a minefield of social anxiety. But here, in the electric air with rain pouring down and Jamal smiling like she was actually worth rescuing, Maya finally felt like she could breathe.