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Electric Waters

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The goldfish crackers were a mistake. I stood by the snack table, clutching the bag like it contained the cure for my social anxiety instead of processed cheddar fish. Maya was across the pool, laughing with her friends, her hair wet and perfect. I'd been crushing on her since sophomore year, and tonight—June 18th, the last pool party before graduation—I was finally going to talk to her.

"Nice hat," someone said. I jumped, nearly scattering orange fish everywhere.

Marcus. Of course. The guy who'd made my life miserable since seventh grade was now smirking at my lucky fedora. "It's for character," I mumbled, feeling my face burn.

"Whatever you say, man." He cannonballed into the pool, splashing water everywhere.

The sky had been purple-streaked all evening, the air thick with that heavy feeling that comes before lightning strikes. I was overthinking everything—my outfit, my hair, the fact that I was still holding goldfish crackers like a total dweeb—when Maya swam over to the edge where I stood.

"Hey," she said, dripping wet. "You gonna come in or what?"

"Uh." My brain short-circuited. "Maybe?"

She laughed, but not mean. "The water's perfect. Besides, looks like a storm's rolling in." She pointed upward, where real lightning now cracked across the sky, illuminating everything in electric blue.

Everyone scattered. Parents yelled about safety, towels flew, and the party chaos peaked. In the confusion, Maya grabbed my hand, her palm warm against mine. "Come on!"

We ended up on her covered porch, watching the storm, eating my goldfish crackers in the rain-splattered silence. She told me she'd been wanting to talk to me all year. I told her about my lucky hat. We sat there while the lightning flashed, making fun of Marcus's dramatic exit from the pool, and I realized something: sometimes the most electric moments happen when you stop trying so hard and just let the storm come.